Sunday, January 27, 2013

Extended Essay 1 Draft 1


Extended Essay 1
Blogging, Reading, Writing
Paige Jones
WRIT 1122
M/W 4:00-5:50

Millennials:
A Generation of Independent Thinkers

Although it is argued that the literacy rate of the upcoming generation is declining, on average, young people are reading more and more often than all older generations. Certainly, this reading and writing is principally non-academic and does not require intellectual consideration; however, it largely involves both technology and social networking that allows the upcoming generation to be uniquely equipped to adapt to machines and other expertise. Technology now allows us to gather a diverse range of information at a much faster pace. The way we obtain information in this technology age is changing drastically, and therefore, the way we define literacy must change to fit with the current civilization.
            Technological advances and the information age dramatically increase the accessibility of texts and information, allowing youth to have constant access to a wide range of academic and other written works. Technology allows individuals to access texts from anywhere through the Internet. E-books, audio books, and online media are all more extensively available for all people, decreasing the discrepancy in literacy due to financial standing. This is because these online resources are much less expensive than printed books and much more accessible to all people regardless of physical location. This approaching generation can be seen reading more often as well. By communicating through text messages, social networking websites, and email, this young generation reads more words everyday just to communicate with others than any generation preceding them.
Nicholas Carr explains in his article, Is Google Making Us Stupid?, that it has become increasingly hard for individuals to engross themselves in a text because it is becoming more common to have a shortened or condensed form of writing that does not require people to entirely engage with a text. Carr describes this, as “Once I was a scuba diver in the sea of words. Now I zip along the surface like a guy on a Jet Ski” (Carr 1). Carr reveals that the Internet is now consuming our lives because we not only use it for research and email, but also for maps, the telephone, newspapers, and even television. The Internet is now making people adapt to the capability of processing information at an even faster rate, increasing productivity. Widespread use of the Internet has caused the way our society operates to shift, and therefore causing a much-needed shift in what literacy means as well. As a society, we must return to the fundament of what literacy really means and how we use reading and writing in our everyday lives. The foundation of literacy is to share ideas and allow individual’s opinions, creative thinking, and intellectual writing to outlive the author’s short life. This has never before been as easy, instant or within reach of an entire population as it is today. Individuals are able to self publish at no cost through blogging, people can share their unique creativity through photos on Pinterest, and individuals can connect with people around the world through Facebook. Internet access and a keyboard are the only things needed for individuals to share with the world their ideas, their beliefs, and their life. This is what literacy is coming to mean in the current technology and information age.
In the article, America the Illiterate, Chris Hedges describes that the illiterate majority of America, “is informed by simplistic, childish narratives and clichés” (Hedges 1). Hedges continues to illustrate that the “political leaders in our post-literate society no longer need to be competent, sincere or honest. They only need to appear to have these qualities” (Hedges 2). He further describes the illiteracy of our nation’s leaders by analyzing the diction that past Presidents and presidential candidates used during presidential debates throughout the last century. The results included George W Bush speaking at a sixth grade level, Kennedy at a tenth grade level, and Lincoln at an eleventh grade level. Showing that the Presidents farther back in our history are considered to have been smarter because of a lack in technology that resulted in people reading and writing more and at a higher level. However, Hedges does not give this data context of whether the grade level that each President spoke at is compared to one time period or the President’s respective time periods and this context drastically changes the interpretation of these results. However, regardless of the concept of brainless men leading our country, the leadership of our nation is adjusting to the current times as well. By using language that all people, not just what voters can comprehend, we are able to have a more engaged youth who are concerned with he broader community. In addition, using online media and advertising, political candidates are able to reach a wider range of constituents. Citizens are now able to overthrow oppressive government regimes using the power of social media to connect with others.
            Nicholas Carr and Chris Hedges both argue that the contemporary technology is inhibiting the current generation of young people to become more intellectual and independent thinkers. However, due to a rapidly advancing proficiency in technology, this generation of young people, known as the Millennials, is completely equipped to transform and adapt to an assortment of jobs when they enter the work force. Once the entire generation enters the job market, the Millennials will be the single most technologically proficient generation employed, and with this, we will be able to uniquely and expertly fill the 35 million jobs that are going to become available within the next five years (Door). On average, Millennials have more friends or connections on social networking websites like Facebook, Twitter, and Pinterest that allows them to have a wider variety of information and opinions at their fingertips. This is an extreme contrast to any other generation or group of people. “With new technology, Millennials are 2.5 times more likely to be early adopters” of new technology, new ideas, and new procedures (Fromm, Franz).
            After analyzing the writing works of college students across the nation, Andrea Lunsford found, “that the length of student writing has increased nearly three-fold in these 25 years” (Lunsford 2), revealing that the Millennial generation is doing more academic writing than any generation before them. Lunsford also concluded, “that while error patterns have changed in the last twenty-five years, the ratio of errors to number of words has remained stable not just for twenty-five years but for the last 100 years. In short, we found that students today certainly make errors—as all writers do—but that they are making no more errors than previous studies have documented. Different errors, yes—but more errors, no” (Lunsford 2). These errors have shifted because of the technology of spell checkers and auto-correct.
Andrea Lunsford also examines the affects that text messaging, social networking and other informal systems of communication have on academic writing. She observed in her study that, “students did plenty of emailing, and texting; they were online a good part of every day; they joined social networking sites enthusiastically. But rather than leading to a new illiteracy, these activities seemed to help them develop a range or repertoire of writing styles, tones, and formats along with a range of abilities” (Lunsford 1).  She goes on to note that by the time students reach the collegiate level their ability to adapt to different writing styles and tones has become very advanced. If anything, the Millennial generation has become one of a more diverse range of writing styles and abilities caused by the current technology.
Even though there is no clear or detailed definition or standard of literacy, the ability to read and write proficiently has increased and extended to more people because of technology. Technology allows books and academic texts to be more accessible to everyone, in addition to people reading and writing more often everyday to communicate with their peers. This generation of up and coming young people allows for an exclusively competent group of people able to adapt to new tools at a much faster rate.



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